Tuesday, August 14, 2007

Baarisho me...

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Baarisho me aasmaano se
Duriya simat si jaati hai
Baarisho me kitaabo se
Zindagi nikal aati hai..!
Har khalaa bheeg jaati hai
Duniya hare rang me doob jaati hai!

Baarisho ke dhaago se
Zamee-o-AasmaaN sil jaate hai
Tumse hum mil jaate hai
Zindagi ke maayne badal jaate hai
Kabhi dekha naa ho humne jise
Aise rango me ghul jaate hai!
Baarisho ke dor par jhulte hue
Hum aasma ke aage nikal aate hai...

Paani se kuch rishta hai humaara
Koi bina bheege reh nahi paata...
Chhule isse to jal jaate hai
Doob jaaye to nikal aate hai.......

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2 comments:

Anonymous said...

"..Pani se kuch rishta hai humara
Koi bina bhige reh nai pata..."
mai bhi bina bhige reh nai pai.. this touched me somewhere deep in my heart, aur maine phir ek bar kuch dhundli hui yaadon ko jiya...
i must say...u have a great ability to translate feelings into words!! CONGRATS!!

Unknown said...

Bhai, ei kobita to khub ii sundor hoyeche...brishtir moton ii bheja bheja tar moton ii sugandhey bhora aar bristir shosto madhurjo niye.

Baarisho me aasmaano se
Duriya simat si jaati hai
Baarisho me kitaabo se
Zindagi nikal aati hai..!

I feel that the contrast brought out in these lines makes them really beutiful.

Equally beautiful are these:
Baarisho ke dhaago se
Zamee-o-AasmaaN sil jaate hai

very well done Kunal!! It is my sincere wish that you never let go of your power to feel the untangible this with this intensity.

nandini